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Post by snivydash on Aug 9, 2011 4:59:52 GMT -5
This is pretty much my first ever fanfiction, so bear with me if I update slowly or it's not as big as you would want it to be.
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Chapter 1: It Begins
He stared at the computer. How long? How long would it be? He looked away for a second to look around his room. It was full of Harry Potter merchandise. On every little table was a wand, two Golden Snitches flying around and there was a toy Quaffle by his feet. His name was Will Hallow.
"Will, come down for dinner!" But Will shook his head. He would not leave the computer in a moment like this.
"In a minute, mom! I'm doing Pottermore business!" Will shouted back and it echoed through the bedroom down to the kitchen where his mom, dad and sister were. He knew his mom would be less than pleased, but hey; he had to wait by his computer while he waited for the... announcing of Pottermore. In five minutes, he would find out what Pottermore was.
"I wonder... Role-Playing Game? A means to chat? Hogwarts in real life? HAHA!" And then he chuckled with excitement. Pottermore couldn't be a dissapointment, Will thought, it just couldn't be.
And then, his head fell on the desk. He was sleeping. He has dozed off when there was four, no... three minutes till the big announcement. He tried to wake up... but he couldn't.
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"Will!" And then he woke up. He had heard his mom shouting his name. He looked at the time. It was time for the announcement. But his mom was marching upstairs to get him to come down and eat his dinner. 3, 2, 1, refresh page! And there it was. A Youtube announcement.
He listened to the Queen of the Potterverse, JK Rowling, talk about Pottermore. So now he knew what it waaaa-
But just as it ended, his mom grabbed the back of his shirt and began to drag him downstairs. But still, he knew what Pottermore was. And it wasn't a dissapointment!
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WolfDawn185
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Post by WolfDawn185 on Aug 9, 2011 5:09:29 GMT -5
Neat story!
It has lots of potential! Keep going!
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Post by snivydash on Aug 9, 2011 5:12:52 GMT -5
Why thank you, haha! I might end the story a bit early, after I get Will to save... the Producers! The amazing relatively scary producers who have god-like powers in Pottermore, lawl.
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WolfDawn185
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Post by WolfDawn185 on Aug 9, 2011 5:20:35 GMT -5
LOL! Sounds like a good ending  From what this sounds like, I thought it was gonna be one of those I-was-sucked-into-an-alternate-reality-and-I-came-back-and-no-one-believes-me stories. ;D |
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Post by snivydash on Aug 10, 2011 9:33:33 GMT -5
Chapter Two: The Death Eating Crusaders
Gulp. In the place in front of Will was some vegetable pie. But the thing is, it was all of the 'crappy' ones. Sighing, Will wished he could go and learn more about Pottermore and then maybe get back to reading Half-Blood Prince; he wanted to read the book in a week. Now he had to read one final chapter by the end of the day or it was all over.
"Oh, Dumbledore. Why did you have to die? And screw you, Snape..." Will burst out and his whole family stared at him. His mom almost choked on her brussel sprouts, his dad looked up strangely and his older sister almost fell off her chair. His mom muttered something about eating, but Will was too distracted. And besides, he didn't WANT to eat the food. He muttered something himself about being excused and his dad nodded. Will, his sleazy brown hair almost flying above his head, raced up to his bedroom where he pulled on a jacket and then jumped at his computer. He opened the MSN window and typed in, 'Hey man, let's chill out in Trafalgar Square... mom said I could camp out!' And this was a reference to the upcoming Deathly Hallows premiere in which Will and his friend, James, would camp out for the night and then meet all of his actor heroes. Daniel Radcliffe, Emma Watson, Matthew Lewis... and maybe even Queen JK Rowling!
Blown back by this thought, Will sat down to think. But within two minutes, he was up and running; soon out of the house and heading towards Trafalgar Square on his blue bike. And then he saw James.
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In a dark alleyway near by Trafalgar Square though, a team of three cloaked teenagers stood conspiring.
"We need to bring Lord Vold-"
"THE DARK LORD, LUCIUS, YOU FOOL!" The second man interrupted the first man, Lucius, who grunted.
"As I was saying, we need to bring the Dark Lord back to life... and then he can take over this pathetic muggle world.." Lucius ended his sentence with a cackle. He then looked at the two other cloaked figures, Bella the girl and Barty the boy. Something big was going to happen.
"And the Dark Lord will reward us, yes, and we will be known as... the Death Eating Crusaders! Yes, yes!" Barty jumped for joy several times and Bella ended up having to pull him down.
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WolfDawn185
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Post by WolfDawn185 on Aug 10, 2011 9:38:00 GMT -5
Looking GOOD, SnivyDash! I would just call you Snivy, but there are two Snivys! ;D The plot's picking up... I'm gonna enjoy this!  |
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Post by snivydash on Aug 10, 2011 10:02:19 GMT -5
Thanks, WolfDawn. You can call me Dash if you want. Lol.
Next chapter will be the Producers and the Death Eating Crusaders.
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WolfDawn185
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Post by WolfDawn185 on Aug 11, 2011 8:11:30 GMT -5
Okay! Sounds good, Dash!
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Post by snivydash on Aug 11, 2011 9:06:04 GMT -5
Chapter Three: The Producers
"That same creepy van keeps circling the street," said the middle-aged blocky man, who was staring at a blue van which had the words 'Avada Kedavra' in big black text. He was Damien Cray, a multimillionaire responsible for maintaining the connectivity and servers. His black hair just above his eyes, he looked back at the other man.
Richard Scave, a big Potter-enthusiast who was implementing fans' ideas and updating the Sorting Hat and Ollivanders. He had natural grey hair but was in his mid-twenties. He looked sidewards to a slightly older man, Xavier Cross, who was texting someone. And the last person was KJ Owling, a very old man who was reading Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
"Yes, I agree," Kevin Jake Owling looked up for a second but then continued reading.
"What kind of people drive a dull van with the Killing Curse on it?" This was shouted out but it was unclear who had said it.
"Someone... is coming out of the van?" Xavier Cross stopped texting to walk with Damien Cray, who muttered something like "Oh yes, yes, yes."
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"Got it?"
"Yes."
"And the stabilizer?"
"Yes."
"And th-"
"FOR MERLIN'S SAGGY SAKE, LET'S JUST DO IT!" Bella shrieked, causing Lucius and Barty to jump but then they all recovered and stepped outside. Then they turned their attention to the building with a massive 'POTTERMORE' sign and proceeded.
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"Hey, Will, let's go to the Pottermore Headquarte-"
"YEAH!" Will and James were so enthusiastic that they ran over to the Pottermore Headquarters and began to take pictures of it with James' Wand Capturer, courtesy of a movie shop.
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"So... we power up the engine and a holographic version of the Dark Lord appears?" Lucius glanced at Barty, who nodded.
"And then we'll use those pathetic Producers' technology to make him real!"
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"Get the guards, we have intruders..." bellowed Damien, who was pacing around the office.
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WolfDawn185
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Post by WolfDawn185 on Aug 28, 2011 21:33:12 GMT -5
MOAR! MOAR! MOAR! I NEED MOAR! XD
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